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One day there was a guy named Frank. Frank lived in New York City, in a big house.
Frank worked at SaskTell and had the day off. So Frank went to the Northgate mall and
went shopping. Then he came home and ate lunch. For lunch he had a wrap. Then he
went out again to stupid store to get groceries. When he came home from getting
groceries it was about 6:15, so he made supper. For supper he had spaghetti and meat
sauce with meatballs. After supper it was about 8:30. He went into the living room and
watched TV. He was watching the movie, I Am Legend. He watched the movie until
11:00, then he flipped through the channels and found Larry the Cable Guy. He is a
comedian. When that was over it was about 12:00.
bed. So when he went to bed he tough he herd someone in the backyard so he got out of
bed and looked out into the backyard. He looked and looked and there was no one there.
So he went back to bed and then about five mints later he herd something again in the
backyard so he goes to the window and then go to the door and goes outside to see what
is the commotion is and why there so much noise so. When he opens the door’ the noise
stops. So he goes to the other house and nooks on the door and no one answers the door.
So he goes back to his house and goes to bed. When he gets into bed he falls asleep at
1:00.
When frank goes to sleep he is out for the night . So while Frank is
sleeping Bob is in the backyard. Bob is a robber. Bob goes to the
step and tries to put his pocket knife in the door. When he puts it into the door he slips it
to the latch and it unlocks the door . So all that Bob has to do now is unlock the big lock
in the door. ( he has to do that to get into the hous). Bob slips his pocket knife into
the big lock and un locks the door and gets into the house. When Bob gets into the house
he dose not know that frank is in the house. So when Bob goes into the house he makes
lots of noise. Bob steals Franks stereo , Wii ,and lots of other things in the house .
Bob goes to the kitchen and steals food and other things. When Bob sees that Frank has
an upstairs to the house. He goes up the stair and goes into the spar bedroom and steals
two pillows and a blanket out of the closet in the spar bedroom in the upstairs. So Bob
goes to the other bedroom but he doesn’t steal anything from that room. So he goes into
the room that Frank is sleeping in. Bob does not know that Frank is sleeping in that room.
Bob goes in the room and start stealing billing and lots of other things. Bob makes lots of
noise in the bedroom . Franks stars moving in the blankets and Bob goes what is that .
Bob stops moving in the bedroom Frank wakes up and sees Bob then call the coops and
says. Hi I am Frank I live in New York City and there is a robber in my house come
quick. So the cops got to the house and caught Bob and said you will get all of your
thing back that he stole and do you mind if we put it on the news frank said I don’t care
if you put it on the news. I will give you all of your stuff back tomorrow I gust have to
put it trough the wash I will see you tomorrow. The next day. The cop came to the
house and nooked on the door and Frank answered the Frank said hi cop the cop said hi
.the cop gave Frank his stuff and left . Frank put his stuff back where it was and went on
with the day .
The End . By Sara my editers, Jacob ,Siera ,Mrs Dalnymple
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5 comments:
this is such a good story do more stoys Stace
that ws kinda good but you spelt ALOT of words wrong so ya you gotta wotk on spelling the words right like when you said that we can write a comment at the bottom you spelt it like this wright that is spelt wrong so work on spelling the words right
you shoudn't of put stupid but it was good
i really loved youre story. because frank dident know that bob was the robber. and that was so funny. Ha Ha Ha Andrew.W
Sara, you need to do a few spell checks. You spelt alot of words wrong. It was a very creative story! Good Work!
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