Friday, November 7, 2008

NewYork ,New York

Hope you like my story.You can wright comments about the story at the bottom of the page.
















One day there was a guy named Frank. Frank lived in New York City, in a big house.

Frank worked at SaskTell and had the day off. So Frank went to the Northgate mall and

went shopping. Then he came home and ate lunch. For lunch he had a wrap. Then he

went out again to stupid store to get groceries. When he came home from getting

groceries it was about 6:15, so he made supper. For supper he had spaghetti and meat

sauce with meatballs. After supper it was about 8:30. He went into the living room and

watched TV. He was watching the movie, I Am Legend. He watched the movie until

11:00, then he flipped through the channels and found Larry the Cable Guy. He is a

comedian. When that was over it was about 12:00.


bed. So when he went to bed he tough he herd someone in the backyard so he got out of

bed and looked out into the backyard. He looked and looked and there was no one there.

So he went back to bed and then about five mints later he herd something again in the

backyard so he goes to the window and then go to the door and goes outside to see what

is the commotion is and why there so much noise so. When he opens the door’ the noise

stops. So he goes to the other house and nooks on the door and no one answers the door.

So he goes back to his house and goes to bed. When he gets into bed he falls asleep at

1:00.


When frank goes to sleep he is out for the night . So while Frank is

sleeping Bob is in the backyard. Bob is a robber. Bob goes to the

step and tries to put his pocket knife in the door. When he puts it into the door he slips it

to the latch and it unlocks the door . So all that Bob has to do now is unlock the big lock

in the door. ( he has to do that to get into the hous). Bob slips his pocket knife into

the big lock and un locks the door and gets into the house. When Bob gets into the house

he dose not know that frank is in the house. So when Bob goes into the house he makes

lots of noise. Bob steals Franks stereo , Wii ,and lots of other things in the house .


Bob goes to the kitchen and steals food and other things. When Bob sees that Frank has

an upstairs to the house. He goes up the stair and goes into the spar bedroom and steals

two pillows and a blanket out of the closet in the spar bedroom in the upstairs. So Bob

goes to the other bedroom but he doesn’t steal anything from that room. So he goes into

the room that Frank is sleeping in. Bob does not know that Frank is sleeping in that room.

Bob goes in the room and start stealing billing and lots of other things. Bob makes lots of

noise in the bedroom . Franks stars moving in the blankets and Bob goes what is that .

Bob stops moving in the bedroom Frank wakes up and sees Bob then call the coops and

says. Hi I am Frank I live in New York City and there is a robber in my house come

quick. So the cops got to the house and caught Bob and said you will get all of your

thing back that he stole and do you mind if we put it on the news frank said I don’t care

if you put it on the news. I will give you all of your stuff back tomorrow I gust have to

put it trough the wash I will see you tomorrow. The next day. The cop came to the

house and nooked on the door and Frank answered the Frank said hi cop the cop said hi

.the cop gave Frank his stuff and left . Frank put his stuff back where it was and went on

with the day .


The End . By Sara my editers, Jacob ,Siera ,Mrs Dalnymple

5 comments:

sarastory said...

this is such a good story do more stoys Stace

timsstories said...

that ws kinda good but you spelt ALOT of words wrong so ya you gotta wotk on spelling the words right like when you said that we can write a comment at the bottom you spelt it like this wright that is spelt wrong so work on spelling the words right

caleb's blogs said...

you shoudn't of put stupid but it was good

andrews blog said...

i really loved youre story. because frank dident know that bob was the robber. and that was so funny. Ha Ha Ha Andrew.W

Ashton said...

Sara, you need to do a few spell checks. You spelt alot of words wrong. It was a very creative story! Good Work!